July 2013
« Jun   Aug »

A dress of peelings

I am on the edge of my family, a small bit apart.

Upset with them, but not really. Upset with myself. Upset they were here to witness my weakness.

I apologize, but I do not forgive myself.

I sit at the dining-room table in silence. The girls are milling about in the kitchen; their plans having been disrupted, they are unsure what to do with themselves, unsure of the volatility of the space that surrounds them. Mark is in the study at his computer, distracting himself by doing something that is not fixing me, for which I hate him a little bit.

I sit there and I stare at my hands and I wish for an invitation.

A way back in.

Mark’s voice, “Hey, Maj? Did you want to make mashed potatoes? You should probably get that started if you are making them from scratch.”

Maj is delighted to be offered some direction, “Of course I am making them from scratch.”

There is the sound of banging and thumping for a few seconds, and then Maj calls out, “Ummmm, Mother?”

“Yes, babe?”

“If I boil the potatoes, will you help with the adding milk part? I always add too much.”

Does she know how much her words mean to me? Does she know what she has just done? I laugh with relief as something tight within me unknots itself and allows me to breathe again, “Yes, babe. Sure.”

“And ummm . . . maybe you could beat them and butter them and spice them and transform them to fluffy goodness?”

Kallan interjects, “So exactly what part of this mashed-potato job are you doing, Maj?”

Maj is annoyed, “Don’t sass me, young lady. I am boiling the potatoes.” She turns back to me, “Mother, do I have to peel them?”

“Yes, babe. You have to peel them. You know Daddy hates when you make lumpy mashed potatoes.”

“Seems like Daddy is just one vote. If the rest of us vote for skins left on, my job is much easier – let’s take a vote.”

Mark calls out, “You know what’s weird? From here on my computer, I can access your bank account, Maj. Want to see? I can transfer money in; I can transfer money out; I can take money from your account and put it in my account; it’s kind of amazing; want to see?”

Maj grumbles, “Fine, Daddy. Way to undo democracy. I’ll peel the potatoes.”

There is more banging and thumping, and then Maj’s voice again, “Where are the potatoes, exactly?”

And then . . .

“What sort of pot do I need?”

“How much water should I put in the pot?”

“How high should I turn the gas so that this water boils?”

“Should I salt the water?”

“OK, call me when the water boils, and I will be back to peel the potatoes.”

I call her back, “Babe, peel the potatoes now. If you wait until the water is boiling to start peeling them, we are never going to eat.”

Maj huffs, “I think I know how to make mashed potatoes, Mother. No need to get all up in my face.”

And then . . .

“How many potatoes should I peel?”

“These guys are filthy. I’m going to need to figure out a way to peel them without touching them.”

Kallan comes to the doorway, “Mom, we are never going to eat dinner. Can I have a snack?”

“How about a banana?”

Kallan cocks her head, “How about a handful of chocolate-covered raisins?”

“Alright, a small handful.”

Maj yells out, “Do not even allow that girl to weasel her way into more chocolate raisins! She had a handful earlier, and she knows better than to ask for more. Besides, dinner is being prepared and she should not spoil her appetite with treats. Also, she should not be allowed to get her own raisins, because she sorts through them and picks out the big ones, which is unfair to the rest of us.”

Kallan turns and bonks her head repeatedly against the door-frame in frustration as her sister speaks, “Mom, make her stop being so Maj-ish.”

“Maj, listen up,” I wait until Maj’s face appears in the doorway, “Kallan is going to choose 25 chocolate-covered raisins, and I do not want to hear a word from you about how she goes about it. Even if she pours them into a bowl and then lowers her face to slobber-eat them straight from the bowl like a big drooling anteater, I don’t want to hear a word from you. Got it?”

Maj turns to yell, “Daddy! I need your help here!”

Mark calls back, “Kallan?”

“Yes, Daddy?”

“Bring me a handful of raisins, would you?”

Maj stomps back into the kitchen, “Fine! You people eat treats while I prepare your dinner. I will just be a potato-peeling slave.”

And then . . .

“Ack! This potato fell in the garbage can!”

“Somebody get this demon-dog away from me!”

“The peels are shooting everywhere – this is a nightmare!”

“OK, I am a genius! Look! I have crafted a tool with which to impale and then hold aloft the potato while I peel it!”

Kallan speaks through a mouthful of chocolate, “You’ve crafted a tool? Maj, you stabbed the potato with a fork.”

“Be quiet. I am a genius. Look, I don’t have to hold the potato with my hand anymore – I just hold the fork.”

And then . . .

“Aiieieieieeeee! The potato leaped from its fork-perch!”

“There has been horrific flying backfire failure!”


Kallan steps through the carnage and wailing to bring me a handful of raisins, and I smile, “Thank you, babe.”


And then . . .

“I am choking on potato dust!”

“Mother, the air is choking me! It is filled with potato dust, and I am being choked to death! I cannot even breathe!”

“Mother, I am serious! My lungs are filling with potato dust! Is this a common problem for potato peelers?”

“Mother, I am talking to you! Potato dust . . . is this a common health hazard for potato peelers?”

“No, Maj. No, it is not.”

“Is that because normally prisoners peel potatoes, and nobody cares if they die?”

“Yeah, that must be it.”

Kallan is thoughtful, “OK, how does that work, exactly . . . the whole potato-peeling prisoner thing? I mean, they can’t give bad guys potato-peelers; they would just stab and peel their way out of prison and all the guards would be blinded.”

Maj pauses, “Blinded? Why blinded?”

Kallan explains, “Duh. That pokey part on the end of the peeler is to remove eyes.”

“Huh . . . hey, Mother? How exactly do prisoners peel potatoes if they can’t have actual potato-peelers?”

I don’t hesitate, “They make the prisoners peel potatoes with their toenails. The guards feed the prisoners extra gelatin to grow their toenails superstrong, and then they make them peel potatoes with their toenails.”

Both girls appear in the doorway to stare at me.

I pop another raisin in my mouth, “What? It’s true.”

Kallan speaks using her best educational filmstrip narrator voice, “Here you can see that some prisoners merely toe-peel potatoes, while other more talented prisoners work on the peeled potatoes to achieve something finer. Watch as a seeming frenzy of flailing toe-nailed artistry reveals a pile of perfectly-sized shreddings that are then spread out in the hot prison sun to dry. And that, boys and girls, is how we get potato flakes!”

Maj gags, “Ewwwwww!”

Kallan continues in the same deep educational voice, “Next, the flakes are sent for sorting to be sure that no toenails make their way to your dinner table.”


And then . . .

“OK, I have peeled the potatoes.”

“OK, I am cutting them up.”

“OK, I managed to cut them with zero bloodshed. I, for one, am quite impressed with me.”

“OK, I am putting them in the water.”

“OK, I am dropping them from a great height because the water is boiling and I am not in the mood for skin grafts.”

“There has been some splashing and some flooding and some mess. I am going to leave these issues to be addressed by someone who is not me.”

“OK, call me when it’s time to eat them. Mother, I am passing the potato baton to you.”

I head into the kitchen to accept the batons of both potato and mess.

Mark walks into the kitchen as I am cleaning up. He stands leaning against the counter for a moment, and then he stretches out his arms, “You want a hug?”

I sink into his embrace . . . his invitation . . . and I mumble against his chest, “I’m sorry. I really am sorry.”

“I know.”

After the potatoes have boiled sufficiently, I beat them and butter them and spice them and transform them to fluffy goodness.

We sit down to dinner (which yes, involved more than mashed potatoes . . . don’t be silly).

I sit down with my family.

I am a part.

“So, Mother . . . I wonder if we might review the bad decisions you made today . . . just as a lesson for us all.”


    42 comments to A dress of peelings

    • I have been informed yet again that no one reads blogs anymore.

      I never check my stats, but I see the truth . . . I am not an idiot.

      Or maybe I am.


      • Issa

        No true. I read blogs…or well I have been now that Feedly stopped holding all my blogs ransom. Also? I’ve been re-reading your archives slowly over the last few weeks.

        Blog commenting goes down during the busy summer months, mostly because we all have to share devices with annoying children who should BE AT SCHOOL BY NOW. Ahem. ;)

        • No, it’s more than that. I am well aware of the ebbs and flows of readership over the course of the year. This is more than that.

          Everybody and their fucking mother is self-publishing what they used to blog.


          Comments have been replaced by reviews.

          The world, it is changing.


          I never seem to find my place.


          • Issa

            Yeah. I get that. I do. I didn’t belong and so now I’m gone. Or my blog is. Shrug. I gave it up. It’s sad for me in some ways and not in others.

            The reviews, yeah, I’ve give up on many a blog because of it. Yet…I do still have close to 150 blogs in my reader. I replace old ones with new finds often.

          • Issa

            Randomly I found myself thinking the other day about your blog as a book. I’d buy it, even though I’ve read it all before.

            • Sigh . . .

              I have thought about that, about doing something like that.

              But for what? A few hundred copies sold to people who have already read my words.

              I have never been good at strategy.

              I have always wished for magic.

              I write and then I wish.

              This is not genius, I have been informed.

              I AM AWARE.

              And yet . . .

    • Issa

      I’ll never looking at mashed potatoes the same again.

      I feel like Maj cooks the same way my oldest cleans. With the hope that if they annoy us enough we will never ask for their assistance again.

    • Shawna

      I do! I still read!!! I’ve just been quiet on my commenting lately. I waited veeerrrryyyy patiently for you to come back to us and I am always filled with joyful anticipation when I see you pop up in my Feedly. I never know if it will be truth, fiction or friction but I am always entranced by your words.
      Love & Martinis!

    • liz

      I check every day to see if you’ve posted. It maked me happy when you do :). I will buy your book but i doubt it would cover your costs ;). Also, we are having mashed potatoes with dinner tonight so i better sharpsn my toenails, because i feel like a prisoner with a 3 year old sidekick…..maybe he can start tunneling while i peel ;)

      • Oh, if I have moved just one person to peel a potato with her toenails, my day will have been completely made.

        DO IT!

        Hee hee.

    • Tela

      still here. still reading.

    • Just because eleventy gazillion estrogen laden HERBLOGS have their knees on the intertubes, choking the life out of it, does not give you the right to even consider ending your magic.

      Your words have magic.

      And if they don’t come to me over the internet, I will have to launch over your wheelchair ramp, like the Dukes of Hazard, and crash through your front door. Unarmed from Down Under. With massive toenails.

      Which would totally freak out Maj.

      Se best you just keep writing.

      P.S. Talent is talent. It is not necessarily spotted in the century that it shines. So there’s that.

      P.S.P.S. Why do you think they call them potaTOES?

      • PotaTOES??

        Oh my god, how did we all miss that bit of loveliness?

        That is awesome.

        As for shining in the wrong century?

        That sounds like just the sort of miscalculation I would make.

        Silly lovely you.


    • lelisa13p

      Yummy post. :D

      I missed you when you were gone.

      I happy-danced when you returned.

      I kept my sentiments to myself. Until now. :o)

    • I read. And I am inspired by your parenting, and hopeful that I can be half as witty and fun with my children.

    • I messed up my own email address in my previous comment; my hopes for wittiness are maybe too high.

      • You know that moment when someone catches you off guard and makes you laugh uncontrollably?


        Thank you so much for that.



    • Robin K

      This had me internal laughing, head bobbing and perhaps even some jiggling (shhhh) whilst my husband snores beside me. Tears. I too somehow know that prisoners potato peel. Not sure why. Teary over here. Awesome. Also love how apart separates into a part by coming together, regrouping. Has me thinking. Yay for laughter and thought!

      • Right? Somewhere somehow prisoners somewhere must have been forced to peel potatoes, even though that makes no sense at all. It must have happened.

        How else would we all be so convinced that this is how prisoners spend their days?

        As for the thought of you laughing?

        Such a lovely thought.



    • Samantha A

      Commenting or not, I love you to pieces and smile when you show up in my inbox even though my life is quite a heap of chaos and I don’t always have time to read the awesomeness you write and …. Wait. This wasn’t about ME it was about glorious YOU. so….right. Write. I love it. :-)

    • I read, been too tired to comment, but I read.

      Was going to comment just b/c of the not being in the mood for skin grafts that made me laugh.

      I needed to laugh today.

      Much love to your magical girls.

      (I’m with you. Who wants to buy a self published book of already read blog posts?? Not me)

      • Eh . . . I did not mean to turn this comment section into a discussion of who is and isn’t commenting . . . what does that matter?

        I have just never found my place in the blogging world, and with every step that world continues to take into the future . . . I find myself more and more out of sync and out of step.

        All I want is to figure out where I am supposed to be.

        How I fit in.

        How I am apart.

        A part.



    • Listened to ‘fix you’ cover from Rock Star (remember Rock Star?)on the train ride this morning…

      but there is something about the two potato peelers in the drawer by the stove we received as wedding gifts over 10 years ago – I hadn’t noticed until now neither has the eye stabbing end bit.

      You see? Your words are changing the way I see…you can read the metaphor into that if you like but like Mrs Smith said, “There is a giant space and we fill it with the things we don’t say.”

      Or maybe we fill them with the words until they open their eyes.

      I read you.

      • Babe, what sort of lame-ass wedding gift is a potato peeler?

        Good lord. They didn’t even spring for the eye-gouging option?

        Who ARE these people?

        Also, my eyes misread your last sentence as, “I need you.”

        Which works for me as well.


    • Mishelle

      I may never eat instant potatoes again.

      Maj’s potato dealings reminds me of the 1 time my ex did the laundry… he announced EVERY move and expected congratulations after walking away from the mess (leaving it for someone else, who was not him, to clean). Funny how Maj’s made me howl with laughter and his… just did not.


    • Miriam

      I read. I just suck at commenting. I read because I love the dynamic in your family and Maj and Kallan are awesome. Also, one day when my 16mth old is a teenager I want to be the kind of parent you are. Keep writing…I will keep reading!